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You were the reason why I smiled, why I laughed,
but you were also the reason why I closed myself from the world;
You made me feel like I was important and loved,
but you were also the person who made me feel like I had no worth.

Drenched in tears, here I stand, staring at your fading silhouette,
I was broken for you were the only reason why I lived;
My own existence had no meaning and for me the sun has set,
So I am now a heartbroken soul, with no more than my words to give.

I am no hopeless romantic nor a helpless lover,
Now I'm all alone for what you've done;
Now, I have no heart, it's been tightly covered,
And you're the reason why my feelings are gone.

And now, all faded away, I am no more but a wandering soul,
A lost girl in this hell-like place we call our home or so it seems;
Your smile, your words, your promises, everything turned to coal,
As all of those burned and everything became a dream.
©2005-2009 ~lhukhe09
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Author's Comments

This is a poem that I made for our English class.. =3

I expressed my feelings in this poem.. You see, I was really sad at the moment, 'coz I remembered some things.. O_o;;

Oh well~ ahehe..

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Now, even as a poet myself, I'm usually not one to read deviantArt poetry that just came up on the recent deviations screen.

But I'm really glad I clicked onto this.

You see, what I admired about this was that while the themes of "setting sun" and "having no heart" are primarily clichéd in poetry, you made them seem new and polished.

:clap: Wonderful.

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:star:
As life flows on,

who ever will read it--
this keepsake to her
whose memory will never die?:star:
--Lady Murasaki:star:
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Aww, that's so sad... :wow: I love that last verse. Amazing work. *w*

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Working backwards...
:iconlhukhe09:
Thanks so much for appreciating my poem.. =3

:hug:

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Sad, sad lives.

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